Sunday, November 1, 2015

Jesus At Anger Management Comments

Rating: 4.0

Hi.
My name is Jesus and I’m here because some people seem to think I have a problem with anger.
(chorus of ‘Hi Jesus, Hello Jesus’ from other group members.)
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Bri Edwards 05 November 2016

i forgot to ask where the line is, but then i read Kelly's comment and saw he beat me to the punch(line?) . bri :) p.s. important question (at least for me) : male or female goat? ? ?

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Mike Smith 01 March 2016

Satirical, humorous, and entertaining. Reads a bit like a script for some off the wall play. On Wes's comment, I've struggled to decide what is and is not a poem. I think ultimately it comes down to the person reading it. To be as cliche as possible perception is reality. Whether or not it's a poem, in my opinion, is arbitrary. The focal point here is your ability to humanize the most famous figure in history and make him relatable (flawed even) in our mind. Great write. Fun read. I wonder if it could be expanded? Part two?

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Wes Vogler 25 November 2015

Interesting concept .. I am thinking of parallel situations and my head is spinning. You are an entertainer, Brian It's not a poem though. the 8 is for the conc ept and imagination.

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Brian Mayo 25 November 2015

An 8 is better than a poke in the eye with a sharp stick, as my father used to say. Thank you. My new motto: Were you not entertained? lol

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Kelly Kurt 01 November 2015

Crazy stuff, right? Now, where's that goat line? : -)

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Brian Mayo 05 November 2015

Get thee behind me, Satan. No, seriously, you're behind me. No cuts allowed.. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2015

Jesus truly manages anger through his power of knowledge and understanding. This is nice, wise and interesting poem shared here on religion topic....10

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