Sunday, October 4, 2020

Jester's Jig Comments

Rating: 3.0

Retracing, the paper it flows, words encoded wicked.
exponentially a threatening avalanche sways; a hefty pile.
already the day's shorten seen through Autumn skies.
meanderings welcome sparks of fruition which die, falling like leaves,
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Paul Brookes
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Bri Edwards 05 October 2020

I think (?) your Poet's Note(s) is 'telling' and helps me understand poem. Thanks. ;) some interesting lines, including esp. these: meanderings welcome sparks of fruition which die, falling like leaves, such sentimentality makes me nauseous, still a maudlin tear trickles tentatively. (nice alliteration) & who needs popularity? -maybe it's not 'needed', but it couldn't hurt (much) , could it? bri :)

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