Saturday, December 6, 2008

Jester Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to tell thee
how much I'm lonely
How I feel falling
day and night
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Asif Baloch
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Maryam Khan 14 December 2008

i'll definitely hear you, you can tell me you are also one of my favourite poet n plz live a happy life. maryam

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Anjali Sinha 09 December 2008

tell who? someone someone who? no one.... Hey Asif tell me, me here I love to hear and read you-you one of my fav poet on ph so tell me. your poem is like a river flowring gently like the wind blowing softly, the green leaves carressing, like the snowflakes hiding in her silken white veil shyly I luvvvvvvvvvv vit A+ and 10+ goes to my fav list regards anjali

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Sandra Fowler 08 December 2008

Your thoughts deserve the respect due to those who write with excellence. Take care. And may your gifted pen continue to be blessed. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Seema Aarella 08 December 2008

Your writings reflect your inner self so efficiently, each emotion magnified by appropriate metaphors....and the name jester suits the mood of ur writing here, everyone would seem like a jester with no one to respond to their appeals....a soulful write...aijaz, best like always!

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Dr Kamran Haider 07 December 2008

Beautiful, courageous and mind stirring write indeed... You are definitely not a Jester Asif bhai... The one who can feel your soul through your soulful words, can know what you really are… God bless you with more purity of thought and sheer wisdom… Thanks for sharing this great piece…

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 December 2008

Pure heart poured in the form of pure poetry.....so well did Bhayya. I felt like reading some old classical poem...............

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*Trusting You* 06 December 2008

wow this is so close to my heart right now... reading this felt as if you touched my soul. this is amazing... it made me speachless. great job. I will add it to my favs. Becca

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