Saturday, May 30, 2009

Jerusalem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Old woman,
You shiver on
The bomb-shattered street;
Alone
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Ejaz Khan 07 June 2009

So very young and so wise, greetings on writing a beautiful poem. How the judge will judge the transgressions of the wicked, is a matter to be seen. Jeruslem, litterary a city of peace is but a sad part of the world, all drenched in misery and blood. A beautiful write though! You deserve my 10+++ and cheers

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Joseph Poewhit 30 May 2009

Nice tribute to GODS promised land. I wonder what Jesus would say about todays world or maybe MATT: 24 says it all.

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