Saturday, June 25, 2011

Jeremy Jones Comments

Rating: 4.5

Gypsy Rhonda from Wales, eyes
as black as coal, looked into the
Parson's soul. She warned: “Sky
is red, sea is blue, beware of
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Cleveland W. Gibson
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Funny poem. Loved the ending Fancy some lardy cake or buttered scones. Maybe change the stupid grin to fiendish grin or gloomy grin on a Sunday will be more appropriate.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 18 February 2014

Take thee not the name of Jones in vain :) A grand little tale Mr.G. full of humour and hidden rhyme. Well penned |

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Cleveland W. Gibson

Cleveland W. Gibson

Calcutta, India
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