Saturday, February 5, 2005

Jello's Ode Comments

Rating: 4.9

Fruit-flavored lights!
Shivering, quivering, edible sights!
Spooned up suns of chewable mood-
Plasmic, prismic, rhythmic, food.
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Percy Dovetonsils
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Shelley B. Keats 06 February 2005

Congratulations! a fine humorous poem of verbal and metrical dexterity! You should coach us!

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Percy Dovetonsils

Percy Dovetonsils

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