Jefferson Park Comments

i like this it reminds me of my youth

Oh..Sorry 4 copiying dear Rico! Your poem drive me into some memory! Hope u wont mind. I love u.. Mmm..I mean Your poem! : -P

Madiun park, Is where I used 2 play Singin n dancing all hours of the night n day Through sunny day or rainy night Through long lasting friendships N the bleeding fights Walk around the park the guitar's playing my voice's singing N just let my body dancing Collect the coins from them who sat there Legally Or forcely! The park was our haven A place to assemble N our problem defeat Or getting worsen When I think back on those years Years full of worries n fears I wont return back there Not now Not ever!

Sometimes the only way to go back is in our mind. I really like the poem. Well penned indeed, my friend. Best wishes. Richard