Monday, October 5, 2009

Jealousy's Wrath (Envy's Twin Sister) Comments

Rating: 5.0

(1) Is like lightning bolt splits heaven in half
(2) It shakes the earth in moments laugh
(3) Causes onerous rumbling sound
(4) Sways ev’ry thing around
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Noel Horlanda
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Shashendra Amalshan 18 October 2009

I got to say I have never read anything like this before.. You are such a philosopher indeed. This is a great thought provoking piece.. I guess you can write your own dictionary about certain terms(kidding) /... Very nice. Well Done! ! 10 regards Shan

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wonderful poem..so lovely written..with musical touch...enjoyed it

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Mubeen Sadhika 10 October 2009

Nicely composed. Beautiful flow. Good thought.

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Sandra Martyres 09 October 2009

I agree with Kesav, this is a very eloquent and colourful expose on jealousy...great write 10

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Kesav Easwaran 09 October 2009

a multicolored picture of jealousy personified...eloquent composition...thanks...10

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Lady Grace 05 October 2009

jealousy can cause trouble..

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Surya . 05 October 2009

a wonderful descriptive and educative poem. voted10 surya

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Surya . 05 October 2009

a wonderful descriptive and educative poem. voted10 surya

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Surya . 05 October 2009

a wonderful descriptive and educative poem. voted10 surya

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Ejaz Khan 05 October 2009

Very descpiptive, very well narrated and very thought provoking write Noel! Thanks for sharing!

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