Monday, August 11, 2008

Jealousy's Legacy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Following, sinister, with fanged-tipped wings,
And dreaded - for it had returned,
Looking behind at the vast ugly beast
I experienced shame as I burned.
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Fay Slimm
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Vincent James Turner 25 September 2008

i have read this poem twice now and the only way i can comment on your poem is asking you the poet to read what you have wrote, as this is exactly how i feel about your ability to write like this! ! ! ! ! ! a most wonderful idea for a poem, personifying Jealously with lines like Following, sinister, with fanged-tipped wings, And dreaded - for it had returned' make this poem even stronger. with respect Vincent

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Tom Balch 15 August 2008

WOW this really hits jealousy, a great piece, thanx for posting.10 from me.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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