Thursday, September 18, 2008

Jealousy's Call Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking for hearts to burn with mistrust
The Monster approaches, jaundiced with lust.
Examining with sceptical care,
It imparts to motives a doubting disgust.
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Fay Slimm
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Eyan Desir 01 August 2009

Well written...........................good write

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Keith Hendrickson 13 January 2009

top to bottom a great piece of work. you are a talented writer

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Bob Gibson 22 September 2008

! Great poem Fay! thank God Jealousy is not part of my make up ' regards Bob

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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