Saturday, November 12, 2016

Jealousy Is The Nature Of The Beast... Comments

Rating: 4.5

Jealousy Is The Nature Of The Beast.

Don't tell me I don't know how you feel
I couldn't possibly feel that need.
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Annette Aitken
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Terry Craddock 09 January 2017

Jealousy Is The Nature Of The Beast.' yes and sadly there is often a beastly reason for jealousy, the reality of betrayal is a bitter blow below the belt

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Tom Billsborough 21 November 2016

You have written one of your best poems here, Annette. As Robert says it builds to a fine crescendo. This one has to go to my favourites' list. It's as good as anything as I have read in a long time

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Bill Cantrell 20 November 2016

.......you belong to this shadow..you will become a dark passenger to it...Annette, this is superb poetry my friend, i am very impressed..a well deserved 10! ! !

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Christopher Tye 18 November 2016

Really good poem, jealousy is always a negative emotion and a sign of unhappiness but we can outgrow and move beyond so things when we are happy.

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Savita Tyagi 17 November 2016

Very well expressed poem Annette. Our darkest emotions have an energy that always tries to take us down. This fight with in us is the most challenging fight. Thank you for sharing.

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Ging Taping 14 November 2016

Jealousy ruined relationship. It creates fire and burnt..but somehow when you are jealous it means you love the person so much it sounds cute. But when it's too much it's irritating :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 November 2016

It destroys everything. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 November 2016

Yeah, jealousy is a sin one should not give shelter in ones mind. A nice message to all to shun it. Very nice.10+++

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