Thursday, May 9, 2013

Jealousy And Hate Comments

Rating: 4.5

A distorted face
with jealousy and hate
a distorted mind
with rage they have to hide
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Dave Alan Walker
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Clarence Prince 12 May 2013

They maybe keeping a lie for someone and finding it too much to bare. Yet there's a solution, take it to God in Prayer! A real nice poem, well done, Dave!

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Shahzia Batool 12 May 2013

they are helpless and miserable creatures, they dont even know that they harm themselves! ! !

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David Wood 12 May 2013

Sadly you are correct. There are many people like that and as poets we can highlight this. Lovely write Dave.

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Wahab Abdul 09 May 2013

ah! jealousy, its a disease......

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