Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Jealousy Comments

Rating: 3.1

Green eyed monster
With sparkling emerald eyes
Lurking in your mind
Having you believe
...
Read full text

Milica Franchi De Luri
COMMENTS

To be envious is like vicious…cycle never stops… It’s a vice…kills harmony and breeds discontentment… Nicely crafted by you…thanks Ma’am 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

0 0 Reply
Ritty Patnaik 17 November 2009

dear milica......jealousy, envy.....the baser qualities in uswhich comes up from time to time.you have put it in beautiful way.couldn't have been better.lovely write. ritty

0 0 Reply
Punsara Amarasinghe 17 November 2009

I have been inspired by your vivid and gracious expression...........so keep up your great ability...................God bless you!

0 0 Reply
Apothecary Montague 18 September 2009

i could not imagine anyone expressing it better

0 0 Reply
Romeo Della Valle 11 September 2009

Dear Milica, this poem is short but powerful, well-penned, thanks for sharing, you got my vote,10+, keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success