Sunday, November 23, 2008

Jealousy Comments

Rating: 5.0

J ust i think of you though I’m J
E ndless chain of dreams, gle E
A pleasure, my eyes on you glue my A
L oves with pride swel L
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Kite Remedy 04 December 2008

At first, it's a lil confusing, but long after staring at the screen, I can understand the acrostic and so the meaning.. Great..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 28 November 2008

nice to read; jelousy is well drawn

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Linda Winchell 27 November 2008

Very neat way of displaying the word! Ten! Linda

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Ewigi Liebe 25 November 2008

wonderful job and its nice to read

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Tsira Goge 24 November 2008

Remarkable jealousy the Nightingale... With the present of poets really blesses the dark blue sky, especially such jealous... 10....... Best wishes, Tsira

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Naru Kaede 24 November 2008

cool, , , (0o0) d Jealousy make madness, , , Great one! (^_^) v

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Min Sia 24 November 2008

So unique..and amazing...I like your style..so exquisite...

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Lynda Robson 24 November 2008

A well structured piece, jealousy or the green eyed monster can be a very destructive emotion, 10 for you Lynda xx

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Ema Nekaf 23 November 2008

Your officially my favorite poet on this site. You, like myself, play the pattern of words. It's interesting. Nice structure.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 23 November 2008

very origional nice

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 November 2008

Fine play of words and significant! ......10+

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Anjali Sinha 23 November 2008

wow nice something different +++10 anjali

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M M 23 November 2008

Jealousy is a hard feeling, which is difficult to control but... I was very well written, and one can easily 'touch' your emotions through these few lines. I hope you recover promptly.10!

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Fiona Davidson 23 November 2008

Very clever peice of writing...thanks

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Rani Turton 23 November 2008

Nice poem though I hope it's not true, Persian N!

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