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lol! ! very nice........

nice poem. metamorphic and picturesque--complete with lily, orchid, rose and lotus. 10 points to you

lovely, great metaphor 10for this picturesque piece of writing,

we could continue on & on. But that's the stop point to be mesmerised by this poem where it stops. A great metaphor still haunts me without any word to say...pl keep on sharing such poems for me.

ekdam sahi... :) :) :)

it is great i like everything sways

Your heart portrays such beauty, elegant words speak in such a sweet tone.

nice metaphora and beautiful picture of your heart!

Nice poem. Enjoyed. Thanks.

the imagery in this poem is truly amazing. and the flow is great too. a wonderful piece

Isn't she Spencer's Fairie Queen!

no doubts, this is one of the most wonderful poem i have read. it has the rhythm of the wind and the rhyme of a beating heart. a 10 for this brother. thanks, melvin

nice poem agree with Rebekah Gamble it seems unfinished but thanks for inform me

This seems unfinished.

...imaginative...wonder what inspired it...neat, provoking lines...we never fully appreciate who we are because we want what others have... -angelic ebullient, good choice of words too...its a 10

Nice imagery and unique thoughts in this pretty poem! - Raj Nandy

wow... seeing others beauty and not our own really is a madness that drives us to lessen our own self esteem... nice... reminds me of anorexia...

good poem.............

Lotus feels quail and nervous, As her cheek turns rosy pink, Whenever lady is amorous, Making lotus flinch and shrink.......perhaps you should rearrange your lines in this format........

it is poetry of infinite beauty compared tastefully with all the beautiful flowers...well composed.......and the title superb!