Wednesday, January 28, 2015

Jealousy Comments

Rating: 5.0

The negative emotion so wildly strong
Turns you into ashes without a spark
Divides your heart into broken chambers
All of them filled with anguish and ire
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Nishi Kumari
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Unos Isin 11 June 2016

Save the jealous one..

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Nishi Kumari 12 June 2016

Yeah...

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 January 2016

A slow poison stealing the peace of mind Kills you slowly without a sound It pierces its possession over your innocent heart Makes you a blind, deaf and a lame body.. these are beautiful lines about jealousy. it is powerfully expressed. it is the real experience of so many. people can kill you with jealousy. they say women are usually jealous. but when men become jealous, they may kill the other. thank you very much for this poem of life and in life. thank you. tony

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Nishi Kumari 13 January 2016

thank you so much for reading and expressing your views...remain blessed..

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 February 2015

a poem composed on real life pictures

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Ahmad Husain 28 January 2015

Very inspiring poem with a good sort of writing! But please help me understand how its topic clold be fashion?

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