Jealous Pen Comments

Love this, brilliantly penned

Pam.you have got right mix of ingredients while cooking or writing.Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. Wish you a very Happy New Year.

Jette, you already are that good poet! This is an awesome write! All of the write ingredients went into this very enjoyable poem. Loved it!

Brilliant, Jette. Every poem must have its ingredients. And like the delicacies of those great chefs, those ingredients may appear and reappear as new works are finished. The real skill may be in combining those ingredients in such different ways each time, that the recipe never tastes quite the same. This goes to my favourites list.

very nice loved it well penned

Nice sentiments expressed here about the intent to write good poems!

Wow, I love to cook and attempt to write poetry, so much said here with so few words, great job!

Some great Chef This poet must be If she can create Such poetic dishes That send you Into such ecstasy. But it seems to me That here you have presented Her best recipe. Loved it from beginning to end! Deliciously perfect.

Poets are regularly impressed by each other, which shows their essential humility. Each person who authentically follows a poetic path achieves something that others cannot. Collectively we personify lushness and abundance, so these lines really ring true for me: A TASTE THAT TEEMS/ THE SPACE BETWEEN MY LIPS

Beautifully creative. Hmm...those poems we read that seem to attain poetic heights that seem almost unattainable for us do eventually inspire us to write our own unique masterpeices.10+

Following the measure of a metaphor. Beautifully crafted. And it made me smile over my glass of beer.

Thanks Chris. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem :)

A fine poem that speaks of jealousy.

Sure you will...good narrative.

Not jealousy, but an admiring tribute. Loved the style.

A nice poem.I also feel that way while reading others'poems.I admire your pen too.Thanks for sharing.

Jette, I have a poem which expresses similar feelings, one I wrote before I turned twenty-one. See “Village Poetry Reading.” I was reminded then that, as the moral goes from The Tortoise and the Hare, the race is not to the swift... -Glen

I beg to differ with your final confessional line...You are a truly gifted poet.

Jealous pen is so nicely penned....how I could ever be/as good a poet/as is she....Wonderful write..Loved the piece of work..!

Such a brilliant poem, Jette....... a perfect 10+++++