Sunday, December 20, 2009

Jealous Betrayal Comments

Rating: 5.0

I thought we were friends
Someone I could trust on and depend
But now I feel used
And somewhat bemused.
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Romeo Della Valle 20 December 2009

Hannah, this is an excellent piece, well penned, you got my vote,10+++, we all go through this experience in different ways, please, if you have time, read my poems titled 'A LOVE'S GAME', 'IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS' AND 'A LOVE'S DESIRE' and you will see what I am talking about...Keep it up...

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Hannah Davies

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