Saturday, December 17, 2016

Jazzy Somber Bend To Blend! Comments

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Jazzy somber bend to blend
Somewhere beyond horizon
Undulating words wandering
Like nomads turning towards
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

'Be calm and cool down for a while Listen softly to the hymn of life Cords may not break apart. Loved ones will surely applaud.' - Appreciate these inspiring lines of your poem. You haven't been posting a new poem on this site for quite a long time now, Geetha. Hope, you are okay?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2019

Do not fall into the phantom of darkness, Where there is no path of moving forward. Keep singing till soul does not depart. Keep singing even if the voice is good or not! ......touching expression with lofty theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 18 April 2017

Keep singing till soul does not depart.- - - - - what an excellent expression of a nugget of wisdom! ! ! ! Keep singing- -don't fall into darkness and the traps therein. Keep singing- - -keep living every moment of your life because those moments, happy or unhappy, are numbered. Love this piece of writing! ! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 24 December 2016

Geetha, wonderful write...i like how you play the verses to be a beautiful poem... :) :)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 December 2016

Keep singing. Others will get used to it.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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