Sunday, September 7, 2008

Jazzing It Up. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life's hard enough, so it wants jazzing up.
At times needs a rhythm to quicken the beat.
When hurt starts to harden and going gets rough
Soften with music and blues will retreat
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Fay Slimm
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Dawn Slanker 09 September 2008

You were right, this is a fun and jazzy poem. I very much enjoyed this. My town is about to begin its 4 day Blues Fest and this poem made me think of that. Very enjoyable. :)

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David Threadgold 09 September 2008

Hi again Fay. Yup you certainly do like to jazz it up, and when life is so hard, why not? well done Regards Dave **10**

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 September 2008

I luvvvvvvvv jazzin up.........nostalgic event like jazzin up with yer Burkadee....n rum yer way all night with.............All That Jazz! ! ! !

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Bob Blackwell 07 September 2008

Music is good for the soul, but jazzing it up gets one moving and sort of renews. Brilliant Write Fay Bob

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Tom Balch 07 September 2008

Ah! but were you better than good, thanx Fay for a really fun read, (Fay in the living room with lights out dancing and singing out load) LOL LOL LOL LOL fun regards Tom 10+

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C T Heart 07 September 2008

Amazing write...so cool. Dancing and singing in life's challenges goes with the rhythm and beat like Beyonce Knowles.

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Fay Slimm

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