Jayakrishnan Aluva! ! ! Comments

Great tribute, I liked it.

a great tribute. a good flow in writing

A perfect description of a wonderful friend. Every word is the truth and respect.

a great tribute! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is one of your qualities that you use beautiful rhyming pattern which adds to the beauty of your work! ! ! the tribute is brilliantly written thus presenting all the qualities of another great poet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it! ! !

how humble ...and full of respect....a great tribute

A flowing tribute to a gentle soul with absolute symmetry...always pleasure to read ur critique on prose or verse... :)

A flowing tribute with absolute symmetry...always pleasure reading ur critique, in prose or verse :)

A great tribute to Jayakrishnan Aluva in wonderful rhyming couplets, Shahzia!

one of the best poetic tributes with rhyme and lots of reason :) thanx shahzia, , , ,

All poets have there feelings close to the surface and feel too much. Great poem. Highly observational. You need to take the s's off conceives/perceives in the second stanza and 'His gem being gets always thrilled' should read His gem being got always thrilled in the third. I really enjoyed reading this poem 10/10 Thanks for sharing

Hmmm..... What a befitting tribute! I have read two of his poems and he stands apart! His poems are just inimitable! ! Shahzia, This poem of yours is marvellous! What wonderful flow.... How crisp and how sweet! ! I give you a 10

A wonderful tribute to Jaykrishnan Aluva.Your choice of words is always praiseworthy. Nothing to say more.

A nice tribute, wonderfully rhymed, a lovely style 10

I do not know of this person, but your tribute is excellent and beautifully written Shahzia. So many lovely descriptive lines, a joy to read.

A befitting tribute to a person who is compassionate and a reformer in neat rhythm and nice flow.

good or bad nothing hides, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

wow! what a tribute to a man, it must be fitting for him, and kudos to the poetess fr writing a gem, really, language, i mean here use of words and wind -gust like flow flourished, sweet and lovely..10/10