Jaunting By The Streets Of London Comments

3 - So, i say the poem is fairly easy to read, but the English and accuracy could be better! ! And i don't understand why some of the punctuation is the way it is. bri :)

2 – And I’d change “Aren't have importance for the city” to “Don’t have importance for the city” As for “The small population but busiest country, ”, I checked London and U.K. pop. statistics. London has a huge population and U.K. population density was stated as having the 48th highest density of 241 countries listed by Google.

1 – As Archita has asked for more comment from me: I applaud poets who write in a language which may be their 2nd or 3rd or 4th language. I believe I find numerous ‘problems’ with the English here e.g. “Memorizes me of that city” I think should be “Reminds me of that city” or “Recalls the city to me” etc.

i did not finish reading poem. : (

" ...meadows laying aside, " i'd use " lying" , but 'to lay' and 'to lie' tenses are confusing. line 5: fees? or feels? etc. bri :)

A very well written nostalgic write about a city that you love so much... thank you for sharing.10+

By the lanes of the city! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

LONDON IS ONE PLACE I HAVE YET TO SEE NICE POETRY READ MANY MORE COMMENT MORE ON ALL YOU HAVE READ THEY WILL KNOW THEN SEE HOW NORMAL NATURAL FLOW COMES TO THEE NICE WORK POETESS

Very beautiful...fine piece of Poetry.....thanks...very sweet memory

A delight for being a worshiper The plenty of spaces in between the houses, Reminds me of the pain of living alone, .. .... beautiful poem.....edit a little bit..it will be more beautiful..thanks