Sunday, September 18, 2016

Jaunt Of Soul To Earth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like we go in excursion
You know this is for joy
A soul comes to this Earth
Birth he takes with a body.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Kalpana Barik 21 October 2020

Soul has come to Earth to perform his drama. This poem is very nice.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 July 2019

On life and death, One may look at it as a jaunt, but the journey is very daunting. Interesting perspective.

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Pushpendra Patel 26 February 2019

Soul's jaunt is nice. We search for peace. God gives us peace. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Pushpendra Patel 16 February 2019

We return back from travel and we feel the return journey of soul. This is an interesting poem.

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Rajnish Manga 30 September 2016

The poem brings to us the tenets of Hindi philosophy quite beautifully. This is based on the system of birth-death and re-birth. The poets style and the language is easily understandable. Nice one, Kumarmani ji. A soul comes to this Earth / Birth he takes with a body / But life span is very short / Soul returns back from body

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 September 2016

This journey is very short! ! Nice piece of work.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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