~ Jaunt In Vibe Viagra ~ Comments

Wonderful diction! I liked the coinage of words. You have a great facility with language that is evident in your poems.

Loom n’ bloom Why not in you? ....Unification made possible, with the interweaving of natural existence. Man V woman. Nice poetry. Great work as always

Poem is very good, you become better with words the more you write. I loved it. Lynn

Colorful fire works and Laser-Show of words ‘…You’ll hear…I’m here/I’m there…I’m everywhere…’ simply wonderful lines… Use of Viagra as metaphor to escalate up-pull of beau by a damsel Rich reading and full of emotional calorie… Thanks for sharing 10++

Fireworks of jocund eye-candy coinages and fountaining emotion…levitating for girls especially teen groups…no concoction or pretension…retention ‘No poseur I’m’ Straight approach with emotional truth and transparency But ‘En esse éclat’…terrific poetically matching befitting French coinage added original flavor of world class French Red Wine…ha ha ha oophs 10/10/10/10

Plucked best emotions and wreathed by best coinage the golden-thread of this poem… Young poet looking Viagra [not textually]…to surge sprout up-lift Romance in a special orbit for spinning to go on…and she set the motion on… ‘…With noetic nosegay … I say/You’ll endear …You’ll share/You’ll hear…I’m here/I’m there…I’m everywhere….’ This… ‘Here’ …’There’…’Everywhere’…represents entire female flock with chaplet… Poet extends ‘With noetic nosegay’… Magnificent way of expression and enjoyed it … AB 10+++ London

Fantabulous joyride …pulsating… beating… scrambling… Bold… erect…a true poetic nosegay in World Woman’s Centenary Day… by a non-poseuse…who is …’ Your fille gala gitana! ’… Wondrous poem… enjoyed the spirit…how a woman can deliver her unalloyed emotion…’ ‘…Loom n’ bloom…’Why not in you? ...’ A spectacular 10++

Fantastic Poetic Joyride … espy zippy …evocative …frees mind zapping … Many oldies may go for brow arcing… but indeed a post modern and very BOLD poem… Not with typeface model…freeflowing and wheeling…onward and onward… Poet very intelligently maneuvered and hobnobbed word ‘Viagra’ …With befitting spirit of World Woman’s Day… polyglot galore… Enjoyed its message ... poet what gave… 10+++

Really speaking this is a bold ever poem read never earlier by me. I loved the spirit of the poem. U r so vibrant in your diction. Fantastic choice of ideas and the commitment to poetry... coupled with emotion power-pack...

Good write interesting

like your stuff ...................

Wow, read all the comments in detail first: -) Why do some feel the need to constrain us, put us in neat boxes, cages, when poets should be able to write express anything their ability allows. In the form style they dictate, through their judgment, especially among a fellowship of poets? Damsel to Beau: Perpetually I come Go back, …Poetically I come…Go back Want to be not Anymore but. This contrast is beautiful, magical, the romantic sentiment in the language of love, and then the first fertile sustained imagery, so appropriate; so calling on multiple levels of physical intellectual interaction. I wonder if really sensuous poets make exceptionally great lovers, as so many poets of fame that come to mind have earned this reputation. I think I better not post my poems on this topic. 

Viagra is no female stuff...meant for males who lose the very important balance... Good poetic wit...tit for tat...medicated metphor...10

nice flow... i like it here.....

heheh, don't let theViagra, nab ya, honey Ruthie ;)

Read the poem and comments ... what I find that to some the word ‘Viagra’ as if …‘Untouchable’… in the group of ‘Fallen’ word … all the water of Ganges Nine Thames etc in radiation pollution… gosh.. Emphatically saying the use of word Viagra is best befitting with the psychic oscillations of poetry…and poet has very intelligently prefixed by word ‘Vibe’ to filter out the in vogue understanding… Thanks for sharing.. 10+++

well done. nice and different poem and expresses the depth of your emotions.

great description of passion raising the eternal combination of body and soul to a new dimension! ! ! Dr Wael Karameh Karameh....

Very unique expressions my friend! Well done.

With noetic nosegay … I say You’ll endear …You’ll share You’ll hear…I’m here I’m there…I’m everywhere..................... do i look for mirror to know who am i? as heart crouches enticing hoary nosegay yet benediction arrays beauty pristine quest perpetual reasons to riffles in rain................of this a wonderful tribute by international women`s day articulating what is left to be known across the mist of unknowns, superb write yet ingenious,10++, thanks for sharing