Tuesday, October 1, 2013

Jasmines Or You.? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cherie! May I give to jasmines, your name?
Their perfume is just like your scent.
When I touch jasmines, they shy as you used to be;
That's why jasmines, recall your memory.
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Majid Zubedi
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Yasmin Khan 26 October 2013

A lovely analogy is built here to express feelings for a loved ones, as sweet as jasmines. (Should it be ''....believe your lie''?)

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Nader Baheri 06 October 2013

very sweet.i enjoyed~nb

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