A boy ran
Towards a van,
Holding out his hand
Full of fragrant
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Deep feeling and every one with a heart feels it, , here we see it in words, some consciousness, , flower seller is a good theme, , lovely write 10
Our personal values and attitudes make us what we are, - in this case it was rather rude! Well penned! -Raj Nandy
...The drizzle had turned to a shower.... a good sincere write...the quoted line adds to the weight of the truth, mamta brings to light 10
A very sad and heart wrenching incident........Yes Mamtaji, we spend a lot on so many useless things but never care to help a street selling boy......Great composition and a memorable poem.