Monday, September 8, 2008

Jasmine Comments

Rating: 5.0

The jasmine grows beside the fence
Its flowers of the purest white,
They touch my soul with deepest joy
As they now shine in morning light.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Tsira Goge 06 December 2008

One sight the ordinary picture becomes unforgettable.... Very close poems.... I have recollected my jasmins from mine the childhood... 10x10. Best wishes, Tsira

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Ernestine Northover 18 September 2008

This is lovely Andrew, it is a lovely flowering plant, and just right for the soul. An uplifting blossom. Sweet read. Loved it. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Kesav Easwaran 09 September 2008

good poem, Andrew...gives a pleasing read... you project jasmine as the symbol of pure and sincere love - its white ness indicative...10/10

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Sadiqullah Khan 08 September 2008

A very fine poem, , lines are full of imagery and beauty drops from each word, , flow is superb, ,10

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Thad Wilk 08 September 2008

Ahh, a capturing poem of beauty, penned with love - each line, divine! Best wishes Andrew! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Ramesh T A 08 September 2008

The fragrance of your Jasmine is wonderful!

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