Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Janus Is My Name Comments

Rating: 5.0

Am I good or am I bad?
Am I happy or just sad?
Whatever you might think or say
you only see what I portray.
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Bri Edwards 09 September 2020

favorite lines (or ARE they? ?) : " Can horror hide its thrust behind a painted smile? and kindness be an empty move we practice for a while." I don't believe (for a second) that " we are all just the same" . (or DO I?) bri :) p.s. but i kind of like this.

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Shaun Cronick 12 July 2020

Lodigiana a most splendid and well written thought provoking poem that presents more questions than answers and thank heavens for that. Sometimes a reader needs required stimulation, a dark wake call, a slap in one's face. To motivate them and see the light and shadow that exists in us all. Loved it! 10++ and added to my treasure chest for a delicious rereading. Welcome back and I wish you well. Shaun.x.

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