Tuesday, January 3, 2023

January Rains Comments

Rating: 4.6

Nobody can notice your tears
In the bite of the January rains
They merge in salty stings
And into one long stream of memories
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Phil J Hambling
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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 January 2023

As promised, here is my comment: fascinating poem about the harshness of the January rains. Most deserving as TMPOTD (The Member Poem Of The Day) CONGRATS andTop Marks!

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Phil J Hambling 30 January 2023

Thanks for that so much appreciated

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 29 January 2023

thy tears merged into the stream of January rains; beautiful to read; nice affectionate feelings; congrats for being selected the poem as POD

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Phil J Hambling 30 January 2023

Thank you so much

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Rob Lamberton 29 January 2023

I'm glad you received Poem of the Day and that I read your poem again. This time the first three lines drew me in and I've read them repeatedly with awe toward their significance.

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Phil J Hambling 29 January 2023

Thanks Rob that means a lot.

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Phil J Hambling 29 January 2023

Thank you for POD..I'm Honoured

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Congratulations, Phil. Today this marvellous poem is selected as the POD Members. A most deserving recognition, dear poet. And POD is a wonderful occasion for a revisit. Enjoyed reading once again, Phil. Thank you and thank you, PoemHunter

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Matt Starking 29 January 2023

January rains Nicely written.

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2. Wondered how " They merge in salty stings And into one long stream of memories " My heart has gone with your muse, just jumped out of my rib-cage. Loved it, dear poet.5*s

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Phil J Hambling 05 January 2023

Thank you and best wishes

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Lovely. Although it rains almost through the year here in Kerala, Jan is a month sans rain, normally. (Contd)

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Phil J Hambling 04 January 2023

Happy rainy January everyone

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 January 2023

I do not like rains, but I do like to read your fascinating poem, Phil. My comment will follow

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Rob Lamberton 04 January 2023

"The struggle commemorates the days you shared on this path of laughter and sun"…I like the " quiet reminiscence! "

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Nosheen Irfan 04 January 2023

A wonderful poem on rain and how it has an impact on human psyche. A great read!

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David Wood 03 January 2023

I gave up using umbrellas for good waterproofs. I guess you have to do the same with yr heart

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