Nobody can notice your tears
In the bite of the January rains
They merge in salty stings
And into one long stream of memories
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thy tears merged into the stream of January rains; beautiful to read; nice affectionate feelings; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
I'm glad you received Poem of the Day and that I read your poem again. This time the first three lines drew me in and I've read them repeatedly with awe toward their significance.
Congratulations, Phil. Today this marvellous poem is selected as the POD Members. A most deserving recognition, dear poet. And POD is a wonderful occasion for a revisit. Enjoyed reading once again, Phil. Thank you and thank you, PoemHunter
2. Wondered how " They merge in salty stings And into one long stream of memories " My heart has gone with your muse, just jumped out of my rib-cage. Loved it, dear poet.5*s
Lovely. Although it rains almost through the year here in Kerala, Jan is a month sans rain, normally. (Contd)
I do not like rains, but I do like to read your fascinating poem, Phil. My comment will follow
"The struggle commemorates the days you shared on this path of laughter and sun"…I like the " quiet reminiscence! "
A wonderful poem on rain and how it has an impact on human psyche. A great read!
I gave up using umbrellas for good waterproofs. I guess you have to do the same with yr heart
As promised, here is my comment: fascinating poem about the harshness of the January rains. Most deserving as TMPOTD (The Member Poem Of The Day) CONGRATS andTop Marks!
Thanks for that so much appreciated