Friday, January 11, 2019

January Dreaming Under The Crescent Moon Comments

Rating: 4.5

Walking the streets,
tall buildings they gleam of midday Sunshine concealing the cold.
Frost on my hair,
breath visible with each exhale.
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Leah Ayliffe
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Castellenas John 10 March 2019

Verbal and written words. Amazing.

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Doug Bentley 10 February 2019

Happy Valentine's Day! ! Love is in the air! ! Cherry blossom trees with candy heart leaves sprout! ! That's what today's ad above your poem says, anyway. commercialism trumps art every minute it seems! got a genius like you crammed in the corner of an almost abandoned site. Cheer up honey! !

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C F 10 February 2019

A dreamer/wanderer's journey on her own, conscious of all the details that surround her, yet very aware of her lonely existence.... quite a powerful narrative. Thank you for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 17 January 2019

A lovely poem with a nice title. Loved your poetic narration of the thoughts running in your mind.

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Leah Ayliffe

Leah Ayliffe

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