Friday, May 16, 2008

January (An Acrostic) Comments

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J ust as the old year ends the new begins,
A nd once again the countdown is in motion.
N ow we can say goodbye to last year’s sins,
U plifted hearts set out on this new ocean.
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Paul Hansford
COMMENTS
Buscador Del Palabra 03 September 2009

Simply perfect, Nice how you added the third rhyme to make it whole for seven lines. Mike

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Katherine Sessor 16 May 2008

Great acrostic poem! i like the way you described January and the poems flows nicely. =)

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Fred Babbin 16 May 2008

Acrostics are fun. I'm an ex-teacher too.

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