Jamaal E Shahid (Urdu) Comments

beautiful poem, sir! and a beautiful use of paradox. i loved reading it. i would be lucky to get your poetic remark on my new ghazal: dard byaan hai tujhe

It is a beautiful and heart touching poem on farewell with nice collocation recited in the farewell party of Mr.Shahid Hussain sss(civics) promoted as deo(ee) Thanks for sharing.

Ek bhaut hi khoobsoorat ghazal, zabardast.

Though it was recited at a farewell party, but besides that it's a beautiful ghazal. Sare ashaar bhut khoob hayn khas taur per muhe mundarja zail sheyr bahut pasand aaya: - Muhabaton ki ik or dhang se bana bana ke bina rakhi hai. Ke chahaton main firaq kesa, visaal kesa, khial kesa?