Saturday, December 15, 2012

Jake's Christmas Eve.....[exploration; Food Gathering; Fatherhood; Santa; Rat; Long; Humor] Comments

Rating: 3.7

On last Christmas Eve, to a home with NO cat,
came an unwelcome visitor ……, a rat.
Jake was the wood rat's name.
From nearby woods he came.
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Bri Edwards
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Bri Edwards 12 September 2018

i'm sending this to my PH friend Tom Billsborough; he just made a disparaging comment about my friend Santa. maybe this shall change Tom's attitude! ! ! I should hope so. THERE, at least there are NOW two (2) COMMENTS on this, my, poem! ! bri aka brian :)

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Darlene Walsh 25 April 2015

A rat named Jake and wearing a hat, how very civilized :) A nice slightly altered version of 'A Night Before Christmas' and I especially liked the last line.

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Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards

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