Jailed Time Comments

reading again this beautiful poem

I like how you've written it from someone else's view. I think it's very good! ! !

a deep meaningful poem..loved it..10++++

Well narrated the feelings of a prisoner in a jail who always have contemplations towards positivity after the accusement but cant simply make it through the outside world.

you've described the feeling to perfection...nice creation my friend....keep that wind beneath your wings....you're flying now Best to you bro Jon

Yeahhhhhhhh Alex, its like broken wings, you can't fly anymore.Nice writes though.Keep writin bro.

Wow, such a beautiful contrast has been elucidated. Safe in the dark and insecure in the light, for the character that he is!