Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Jahar Se Vi Jyada Jahrila Comments

Rating: 4.8

Tumhe paa kar vi meine roya
Par khushiyo ki chah se.
Mujhe yaad hai meine naha vi tha
Par un khushiyo ki aansu se.
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Geetha Jayakumar 02 November 2014

Aapki kavita bahut pyaari hai per aasoon aur juddai say bhari hai. Sahi kaha aapney... Kitna bewafa hay Ye payaar, Ki judai ka dard - Jahar se vi jyada jahrila! ! Judai ka dard jahar say bhi jyada hotha hain.

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Savita Tyagi 01 November 2014

Lovely Gazal. Kabhi Kabhi krone ke baad hi kisi chez ki vakat pata chalti hai.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 October 2014

Gar tum na mile hote main tumko bhula deta Maine pakar tumko khoya ab bhool na paoon ga. Two lines by me, A nice poem........................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2014

Surprising and nicely expressed emotion of love. Very beautiful writing with sweet words.

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Srabanti Guha 29 October 2014

So poignant but so true it is! ! To get the desired love people die but by losing the love they get more pain... very perfectly it's detailed here

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