Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Jahan's Special Place Comments

Rating: 5.0

The water splashes round you
You balance on your heal
A half a smile upon your face
How does the water feel?
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Stevie Taite
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Alla Simone 03 December 2012

You took us directly to Jahan's special place. Excellent imagery is so easily rolled out here. A pleasure to read. This piece is simply beautiful.

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Poetheart Morgan 26 November 2012

you defined our friend as waters of its river. He is water and forest too.Love this friend! ! Stevie Beautiful tribute!

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Jahan Zeb 22 November 2012

well written. You are something. A good poet and a loving and kind friend. Very Good write Stevie

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

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