Jagged Thorns Comments

This is cleverly done Andrew, I know how hard it is to keep the rhyming words within the verse and after each verse too. You have done a great job with this one. A delight to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Like so much of what you write Andrew, I too, stand in awe Love duncan X

smooth flow of verses..nice to read..greatly written... Ency Bearis

A wonderful poem, you always paint such a good picture, well penned Andrew, 10 Lynda xx

Sounds like a beautiful place to be.....really like this......10

Awesome write Andrew! This poem just flows smooth as a stream on an' on... The rhyming, amazing! A 'terrific poem'! *10plus*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad