Saturday, August 25, 2012

Jaded Knight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Placing her pure kerchief upon my breast
beneath orange shields gold raised falcon crest,
sol's emblazoned heat inflames shaking steel
lance gripped steady by armored hand linked mail.
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Unwritten Soul 01 September 2012

The knight must be tinted with smile while writing this, upon your face i am sure there is a glitter of murmuring love..and the notes below the poem were so humor, lovely and enjoyable...thanks for sharing a piece of poem from castle of crimson sand country_Unwritten Soul

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Harriet James 28 August 2012

Endomorph indeed....m'Lady will not be pleased when she hears this dear Knight! More snot rags may follow! !

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Karen Sinclair 27 August 2012

Breathtaking, your poetry reflecting clearly what the lady dust see, a flailing light of chivalry.....Twas a beauteous sight, dear knight :) tyvm

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Heather Wilson 26 August 2012

Wow, this Knight is not jaded in any way or form, a brilliant write, loved it, - such interesting notes also.

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