Tuesday, March 2, 2010

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I never thought that it will come to this point
When loving you would be too painful
Words used to flow like wine
Now, I am left with none.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 04 March 2010

I come from this poem feeling the exhaustion of one who has tried so hard to love and arrived now at a point of desolation. The words echo in the mind, creating an image of emptiness, of a spent creativity. A sad read but so expressive. Nicely done, thank you June.

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