Friday, November 11, 2005

Jackaby Street Comments

Rating: 4.7

A new priest, he came to our village,
With the Curate he wanted to meet
So he ventured on down, as a stranger in town
To find him, on Jackaby Street
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Lucy Burrow
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Ernestine Northover 11 November 2005

Lucy this is fantastic, I loved every line. This is going to my favourties list.Sincerely Ernestine

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

A wonderful piece, Lucy!

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Lucy Burrow 11 November 2005

Hmmm a beep brow eh? Thanks for being my proof reader Tai! what would I do without you! Regards, Lucy

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***** ********* 11 November 2005

Even a priest can't get from A to B without a childs help huh Lucy? lol Very funny indeed. Two typos 5th stanza 2 'the's' and last stanza 'deep'. A hearty 9 from grinning Tai

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Lucy Burrow

Lucy Burrow

Nigeria, West Africa
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