Tuesday, February 8, 2022

Jack In The Box Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Poor Jack In The Box,
Alone on a shelf,
He lay amongst the cobwebs,
In the attic, all by himself,
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Jayne Louise Davies
horse trapped
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Kim Barney 08 February 2022

Very nice, Jayne. On the last line of the fourth stanza, did you by any chance mean 'longer' instead of 'linger'?

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Jayne Davies 09 February 2022

Yes I did Beryl x Thanks for pointing out my spelling mistake x

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Jayne Davies 09 February 2022

Sorry Kim for calling you Beryl! Lol x What am I like!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 February 2022

I agree with David. I enjoyed it immersely Jayne

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David Wood 08 February 2022

Delightful poem Jayne with very good imagery. A lovely read.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
Jayne Louise Davies
Jayne Louise Davies
Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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