Jack Frosting Comments
In the bitter cold I can see my breath,
As the snowflakes cool my hot cheeks,
Gently settling in my clothes and hair.
I am headed to the car with a cake.
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A lovely presentation! The imagery is precise, and your pace is so nice. I suspect the cake is, too!
Thank you for your kind compliments on my poem (and my cake) .
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8/14/2025 5:27:42 PM # 1.0.0
And the frosting Is uncontrollable For its snowing I pulling my gloves Hop into my car Ah it's much cosier. This imagism perfection. Beautifully written. I actually imagined all. Admirations.
Thank you so much for your kind words and admiration. It makes me feel wonderful. Best of wishes.