Thursday, May 24, 2007

Jacinta Iii Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was no reason
No reason at all.
Jacinta wept,
For no purpose.
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Will Barber
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Brian Dorn 29 October 2007

Great ending (or is it?) , to a great series, Will. It caught me by surprise, ... very creative and uniquely done! !

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Robert Howard 20 October 2007

Absolutely amazing and powerful series. You have made the background of protest, repression and slaughter more real by painting riveting portraits of characters struggling to keep their heads below the line of fire. I find myself longing for for the fear and terror to go away and for Miguel and the narrator to become one person united with Jacinta in peace. This or any other resolution is impossible until and unless the bleeding stops.

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Esther Leclerc 28 May 2007

Men and women of purpose and suffering know that life is fragile, precious, purified by love and loss... more. Your poetic grace blesses your readers. More, please. Esther : ]

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Sandra Fowler 24 May 2007

What an amazing poem! Praise for your rich imagination. Another chapter would be interesting. Always your friend, Sandra

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