Jab Se Piya Pardesh Gaye Hai... Comments

Wow..this is Truely amazing...the feeling of separation is always painful which is really felt in every pin of this piece Great rhyming n a great poem...thanks a lot! ! ! !

Hi Havita, There is new very endearing comment on this lovely poem by Poet Ms Carol Nochols on the translation posted by me. Please take time to read. Thank you Dear Kavita. I too get a little appreciation because your poems.

Sukriya sir

Hi Kavita, The agony of Separation, Search, Pain and Longing heart-rendingly depicted. Jab se piya pardesh gaye hai Chain-sukun sab rooth gaye hai Aati nahi hai raaton me nindiya Kaise kahoon sakhi birha ki batiyan.. And necessarily, Kaise kategi umar ye saari Lagti nhi ab duniya ye pyari Unke bina sab niras hai lage Kaise kahoon sakhi, ab jee na lage… Very nice poem. Well done.10++++