NO ONE KNOWS 
who will go first
women love to go
but men cannot stay 
without a woman 
be she a wife 
or a consort 
life without a woman 
can never be thought 
life and love
make a couple 
let Lord design 
a sample 
when both go together 
as they breakfast 
or 
in the Garden of their own Eden 
collect their final present 
a ROSE                
wow wonderful expression- when both go together as they breakfast or in the Garden of their own Eden collect their final present a ROSE //// love it; greatly wish to the great of PAK the J.A.
तुम ने जो कहा वह कर डाला अब तो मनो पयार है यह दीवना कहीं रूठ न जाये मुद्दत से बीमार है यह (अख्तर जवाद)

 
                     
                
I never knew you write so well especially love poetry that really makes sense. This is resplendent. life and love make a couple....good lines when both go together as they breakfast or in the Garden of their own Eden collect their final present a ROSE.... something called equity in today's sense. And I agree with your this concept. Life goes on Best when you complement each other not compete each other.