Ja Janabh The Best Pak Poet (He Says) Poem by me poet yeps poet

Ja Janabh The Best Pak Poet (He Says)

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NO ONE KNOWS
who will go first

women love to go
but men cannot stay
without a woman

be she a wife
or a consort
life without a woman
can never be thought

life and love
make a couple

let Lord design
a sample

when both go together
as they breakfast
or
in the Garden of their own Eden
collect their final present
a ROSE

Tuesday, April 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: boyfriend,girlfriend,hubby,love,marriage,wife
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
Who will GO
first
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 04 October 2020

I never knew you write so well especially love poetry that really makes sense. This is resplendent. life and love make a couple....good lines when both go together as they breakfast or in the Garden of their own Eden collect their final present a ROSE.... something called equity in today's sense. And I agree with your this concept. Life goes on Best when you complement each other not compete each other.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 April 2019

wow wonderful expression- when both go together as they breakfast or in the Garden of their own Eden collect their final present a ROSE //// love it; greatly wish to the great of PAK the J.A.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 April 2019

तुम ने जो कहा वह कर डाला अब तो मनो पयार है यह दीवना कहीं रूठ न जाये मुद्दत से बीमार है यह (अख्तर जवाद)

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 April 2019

hope she gets well soonly sir JA JI

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 April 2019

JA JI SIR PLEASE URDUISE THIS AS YOURS Who will GO first

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