Wednesday, January 31, 2007

(j) 4 (General) An Intense Desire Comments

Rating: 3.4

I have this intense desire
To sing the song of the waves
As they crash into the rocks
Splashing foam into my caves
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 05 February 2007

The words an' imagery here create thier own ocean.......well pennedTO

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Ernestine Northover 31 January 2007

This reads like bliss TO. lovely words and images here for calming the mind. Love and hugs Erenstine XXX

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 January 2007

Awesome imagework here, T.O....We just can't seem to tpull you away from the water these days, my dear....Beginning to thinkTranquil Ocean, may in fact, in truth, be 'Tranquil Mermaid'...SPLENDID CRAFTSMANSHIP, AS CAN ALWAYS BE EXPECTED FROM YOU... FJR... 2/1/7

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