Saturday, January 13, 2007

(j) 2 (General) A Nomad Comments

Rating: 3.5

Passing through cities in time
I anchor for a few nights
Sitting with them, I rhyme
Life is good, whether its wrong or right?
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 January 2007

Whe nmuch younger, i knew a few wanderers, and i would sware at times that they'd be able to capture solace & happiness quicker & maintain it longer than many of my more fortunate friends....Guess it all comes dpwn to the hert& soul definition of 'fortune'....Excellent imagework, T.O.....Splendid dipiction, crisp structure...the full package, here... F.J.R.

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There is a sort of romantic appeal to the idea of a nomadic life.... always transient, never settling, but 'at home' in one place for a short time; then there is the saddening side, of not indeed having a home, or being 'at home' especially with oneself. I think you express this marvellously. It sort of touches a point somewhere for me. t x

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Geoff Warden 13 January 2007

A rather interesting plee, , , , , or statement of fact, , , , , , emotion shows a sadden heart well done

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