Wednesday, February 21, 2007

(j) 18 (General) In The Mind Of A Man Comments

Rating: 3.1

When your wife bores you, your environment bores you
When you feel she is not a woman...enough to excite you too

When you feel she is not your friend...she just wants to control your life
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Catastrophe King 21 February 2007

This is extremely debatable and it is wrong to be generalised. Literary speaking, a nice effort! BTW... I know some women who did behave like the men in your poem.

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Hell, TO, this is brilliant... I can think of at least one person who will feel that it is like looking in the mirror. 'Your growing son will surely forgive and understand That the father wanted to pursue his passion grand'... historic. t x

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