Sunday, September 3, 2006

(j) 17 (General) They Emerge Comments

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Wandering in my silence
Shadows of words struggle
When they get absorbed
They emerge
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Catastrophe King 30 August 2007

My Response TO: They Emerge….. She was nomadic in her noiselessness She had reflections of unspoken-ness She got them exuded, when transpired! Smoldered her cinders, her lexis glimmers As they become apparent of her fire! She fell into her own deep barrenness, With resonance so bare yet beautiful She did tour her comments & expressions! And, now she swimmed the tranquil ocean!

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Patricia Gale 03 September 2006

Your talent is what emerges in your words!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 03 September 2006

T. O.>EXPRESSIONS OF LONLINESS SO ELOQUENTLY DELIVERED. A Fine piece of work....''''''''''''''''''fjr

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