Thursday, August 24, 2006

(j) 15 (General) Last Night... Comments

Rating: 3.6

Last night I just woke up
Maybe in the early hours of the morning
And just had this urge to set out
On the rain kissed roads
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Preeti - is here! 31 August 2006

Liked this dream, kinda scary, but this one's different from all the others that you've written. I like variety! Preets

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 August 2006

T.O. ...YOU MOST ASSUREDLY KNOW HOW TO MANUFACTURE POIGNANT IMAGERY AS WELL AS CAPTIVE IMAGINATION...I LIKE THIS STORYLINE A LOT...YOU POSSESS A DIVERSE RANGE OF TOPIC AND CONCEPT.A FINE PENNING HERE, T. O.! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Nalini Hebbar 24 August 2006

very nice TO...i enjoyed this poem a lot...thank God you woke up in your room...bruised or no bruise...love...nalini

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Geoff Warden 24 August 2006

Truely enjoyed this piece of artistry..........

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Scarlet Red 24 August 2006

you made me laugh with the word SCREAMED... hahaha.. the same impact if AAAAAHH! ! ! ! is used.. nice piece again TO =)

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Catastrophe King 24 August 2006

That was a nice write.....

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